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My Little Broken Fire Girl,

whose fingers twist and tangle to keep feelings and thoughts and ungodly sounds from bubbling out. whose lips are bruised and chapped from being pursed, from cracking smiles for me, from biting and biting and biting. where's my little broken fire girl, with eyes like matches and words smooth and hot?

she keeps her hair flowing and she keeps her face bright, for even the dimmest fire's shine. on the brink of demise, all washed up and put out, my little broken fire girl lights my way and flickers up.

touch her and she'll burn, but fire's always been my friend, and i welcome her painful licks onto my skin. tame little fire's need to lash out, but this one's always been timid. you have to coax the magic out, the blue-white flame, onto the world to brighten it up.

you've gotta feed her the right wood, you've gotta sing the right spells, and my little broken fire girl will be your second sun.
    Maybe this is dedicated to someone?
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AtTheTouchOfLove Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010
It's wonderful, so comforting. :petting:
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Kaliona Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010
<33 thank you~!
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hatememylovely Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
so amazing... i wish i were as good as you... that's like, god good... dude, you SO have to keep writing!!!
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Kaliona Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
Awww, thank you! <333 This comment made me blush to my ears!
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hatememylovely Featured By Owner May 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
lol ^^
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InVeRtEd-TaCo Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010
This proves exactly why I never, ever, ever get tired of your arts and writerings. <3
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Molii08 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010
oh my godddddddddddddddddddddddddd.

do you even KNOW how fucking much i love your writing. seriously. i fucking love it.

keep writing! c':
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Kaliona Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010
f-ffffffffff. <33 Thank you, love. You're comment has made my day. <3333
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Molii08 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010
oh yay ;u;
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emochibi Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010
Maybe I fucking love you and your writing?
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Kaliona Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010
pfffftttttt <333
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emochibi Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010
You heard me. >:I

<3
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dizzett Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010  Student General Artist
this... made me cry. it is so beautiful and oh my god, i feel so much better. words cannot describe how happy this makes me. i love you, haley.
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Kaliona Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010
You are too fucking cute. I'm glad it made you feel better. <33 Ilu more, by the way.
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avril-showers Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
-flails-
Sweet Jesus Christ, Haley!
that was beautiful!
*JadedCobrah pretty much summed up everything I wanted to say and more ;A;
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JadedCobrah Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010
MMm~! Haley. This is pretty and oh-so gorgeous. I love the similes, the details, your style. All that jizz. And the concept is also amazing as well, and just. God, I love your writing so much I could curl up into a little ball and explode into rainbows and hearts.

And I'm also a little bit curious as to whom it is dedicated to, if it is dedicated to someone. But you know, you should only tell me if that's what you want to do.

I don't recall ever saying this, but, Keep up the good work. :heart:
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Kaliona Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010
Hnnnnnngh /comes buckets <33 thanks, darlingpoo!

Ho hum, ho hum, I hope she realizes who it's dedicated to! HMMMMMM.

Aww, thank you! ;U;
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KyutiHuni Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it very good.
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MaraschinoCherrySoda Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
this...this is just...for lack of a better word, amazing <3
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Kaliona Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010
Haha, thank you!
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dullaidan Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I think it's very beautiful. c:
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Kaliona Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010
thanks, lav. ;D
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dullaidan Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
no problem~ <3
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