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My Little Broken Fire Girl,

whose fingers twist and tangle to keep feelings and thoughts and ungodly sounds from bubbling out. whose lips are bruised and chapped from being pursed, from cracking smiles for me, from biting and biting and biting. where's my little broken fire girl, with eyes like matches and words smooth and hot?

she keeps her hair flowing and she keeps her face bright, for even the dimmest fire's shine. on the brink of demise, all washed up and put out, my little broken fire girl lights my way and flickers up.

touch her and she'll burn, but fire's always been my friend, and i welcome her painful licks onto my skin. tame little fire's need to lash out, but this one's always been timid. you have to coax the magic out, the blue-white flame, onto the world to brighten it up.

you've gotta feed her the right wood, you've gotta sing the right spells, and my little broken fire girl will be your second sun.
    Maybe this is dedicated to someone?
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:iconatthetouchoflove:
AtTheTouchOfLove Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010
It's wonderful, so comforting. :petting:
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Kaliona Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010
<33 thank you~!
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hatememylovely Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
so amazing... i wish i were as good as you... that's like, god good... dude, you SO have to keep writing!!!
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Kaliona Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
Awww, thank you! <333 This comment made me blush to my ears!
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hatememylovely Featured By Owner May 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
lol ^^
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InVeRtEd-TaCo Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010
This proves exactly why I never, ever, ever get tired of your arts and writerings. <3
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Molii08 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010
oh my godddddddddddddddddddddddddd.

do you even KNOW how fucking much i love your writing. seriously. i fucking love it.

keep writing! c':
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:iconkaliona:
Kaliona Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010
f-ffffffffff. <33 Thank you, love. You're comment has made my day. <3333
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Molii08 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010
oh yay ;u;
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emochibi Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010
Maybe I fucking love you and your writing?
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